Sunday, March 20, 2011

     Illustration Friday - Cultivate ....

the plan is to have this completed in color before this friday - but just in case
that doesn't happen I thought I'd put this up now.  Still trying to work a few things out.
feeling like I need to bring out the focal point and figure out how to 
minimize the rest of the piece.  It's a little busy and just too much going on.  It gets across the idea
I wanted, but It's feeling a little off balance.  The right side doesn't feel heavy enough for the the figure, but I don't want to clutter this up anymore.  Also considering the idea that the two tall stacks in the middle are too similar in height.  Guess I still have a lot to work out, this
should be a busy week.  I'm also still working on the whale painting - which is taking
a lot longer than I anticipated.  I'll try and update again in a few days.


Alina Chau said...

nice drawing!!

Sarah Melling said...

I rather like it as it is!

Indigene said...

It is true, we are our worst critic! It is lovely line work! Try to enjoy where you are right now in your work; it is good! :)

Missy said...

Looks great to me, lovin it!

Mohita said...

A great sketch to post for the topis! I too went in the same direction, and am going in the same direction with the freelance illustration. Good luck with it!